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28 March 2005 @ 12:55 am
Some Fanfic...  
Hey, I'm working on some Stargate Atlantis FF, it's a bit of Beckett/McKay.
Could you just say whacha think about it?

After "The Eye" in Carson's quarters

"Hey, Carson! Feeling better?" Rodney asked gently and petted the doctor's head. "What about your headache?"
"Aye, that's better now... but don't speak that loud, please!"
"Are you needing anything? Another blanket, some tea, a book, some food?"
"Aye... Silence!" was the tired reply.
Actually, Carson was feeling miserable. His head felt like it had been split in halves and his nausea had grown stronger in the past few hours. Every noise was like another blow at his skull and when he opened his eyes, he was blinded by the light and it felt like someone was pressing white hot needles right through his forehead into his brain. And then the nausea grew even worse.
Rodney petted the other's shoulder reassuringly. "Alright... OK! Should I... leave or...?"
"Mhpf. Just be quiet, aye?"
Rodney nodded and then he did something, he hardly had ever thought of. He gently took Carson's hand into his own and squeezed it softly.
He was surprised about the cold, shivering hand. Very startled he laid his other hand on top of Beckett's.
One blue eye opened slowly and the owner was rewarded with a heavy wave of nausea. But the he saw the makeshift bandage around McKay's arm and opened the second eye as well.
"What did you do?"
"That? Nothing! Really nothing! I just thought it might be something new. All this boring uniforms, you know?"
'What a pathetic lie!' Rodney thought.
But the doctor forgot his concussion instantly and stood up. "Come here, let me have a look at it!"
The physician opened the bandage sighing, while Beckett was looking for the first aid kit.
No matter how hard McKay had been complaining to Weir about bandaging the arm himself, he didn't want to bother Carson.
The poor guy should look after himself and his head.

(Sorry, just some freestyle translation...)

Anyway... I'm trying to update my Harry Potter FF's pretty soon. But until then... I'm sorry for the delay in writing!

Umbra et Imago & Peter Heppner - Lieber Gott
( Have you seen my meds? )
Mischief: (Faraway!OTP)katydidmischief on March 28th, 2005 02:42 am (UTC)
I like it. I definitely see Rodney not wanting to bother Carson with something, though I'd almost want to see Carson getting worried because the wounds are worse. But I'm someone who likes angst so I'm a little biased. :)

I think its a good start and could work to something nice. Good luck!
the oncoming whirlwindscap3goat on March 28th, 2005 10:23 am (UTC)
Yeah, I definitely wanted Rodney, who's usually looking for a lot of attention, to volunatrily stand back because he feels that Carson's feeling worse.
And Carson definitely cannot stop being a doctor and thus has to look after Rodney. *sighs* Although he has a major headache. (and I must know... suffered from several concussions myself... *ouch*)

It'll have a major flashback which will show how they got together and that will have some angst, I guess, and lot's of Carson in pyjamas.
Mischief: (Faraway!OTP)katydidmischief on March 28th, 2005 12:48 pm (UTC)
Aww, I can't wait to read that! :)